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Bumping through the snow
In a car that is antique,
We don't know what to do,
The future's looking bleak!
A jump that's really big,
We're being filled with fright,
What fun it is to ride a sing a horror song tonight!
Oh, jingles of, commercials,
Are all stuck in my head!
Oh how hard, it is to shop,
On Christmas Eve-I'm dead!
In a car that is antique,
We don't know what to do,
The future's looking bleak!
A jump that's really big,
We're being filled with fright,
What fun it is to ride a sing a horror song tonight!
Oh, jingles of, commercials,
Are all stuck in my head!
Oh how hard, it is to shop,
On Christmas Eve-I'm dead!
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Falling Apart Chapter Six
Falling Apart Chapter Six
Ichigo looked around as they walked through town, trying to find a store where they could get a flashlight. He squinted and read a sign up ahead.
"Shiro up here!" Ichigo ran up to the store and waited for Shiro at the entrance. "There should be a camping section so lets go look." Shiro nodded and entered the store with Ichigo following close behind. They walked slowly down each isle checking for anything that could be helpful. They took several things in the first isles but took less and less as they continued on. Ichigo finally stumbled upon a flashlight but it was much too small t
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cars\adventures of tintin. release time and rehab.
Over the next few days the nurses and physios help Tintin get up and about more. Every morning a physio has a walk around the ward area with Tintin seeing how much he can do and how far to push it. Mr guerrero is on shift for the week and says looks like he can get out on the Friday. Some of his stuff is packed ready but in the Friday
Physio. Hi we need to do stairs test again I know you did it last time but we need to check again
They head to the ward doors to head to stairs but
Physio. You ok
Tintin. No feel bit lightened
Physio to nurse. Grab a chair. Ok sit for a minute and we'll try again
After a minute Tintin stands up and they get to s
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Chaotic Brawl Chapter 16 Part 4
In Chaotic Brawl, Nathaniel, Shal and Taiena see Ike getting coded on the TV and all three of them cheer as Shal says, "Sam tied it back up!"
Taiena says, "Now they only have one character left."
Nathaniel says, "Yeah alright. Shadow versus Ganondorf for the match."
In the Brawl Drome, Sam ports back as Shadow still his outside body and Robert ports back as himself. The blue wave appears under Sam, as Shadow, it goes over him and turns Sam back to normal.
Sam says in a sarcastic tone, "Oh trust me Robert. I did learn my lesson. That’s why I didn’t aim my chaos sphere at your Ragnell."
Robert yells, "Oh shut up! It won’t
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Technique ImpactFirst thing, LOL! xD Thething is, this would totally happen to somebody. Mainly just a few grammatical errors:
1. CAPITALIZATION!!! <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/f/f…" width="18" height="17" alt="
" title="I think I've fainted."/> It could just use a BIT more.2. "ride a sing" should be "ride and sing". <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt="
" title=" (Smile)"/>3. In order to make it fit more with the tune of the song, maybe ditch the "we" of "we don't know what to do."
4. Again with the second line of the second verse, ditch the "are".
5. Instead of a dash in the last line, use a semicolon. It flows a bit better that way.
I need seven more words. And... done!